Showing posts with label nature. Show all posts
Showing posts with label nature. Show all posts

Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Writing Inspiration #3

Nature


It was still early morning. The sun blazed baldly like a lie its heat only beginning the journey down to earth. He stretched his arms up so his fingers tipped it in the sky.   Daddy smoked a cigarette and sipped tea from the flask.  They had a bar each even though they hadn’t done any work yet.  Daddy screwed the wrapper into a silver ball and flicked it on the ground.  Kai picked it up and put it in a plastic bag that was now their official bin. 

A lone call of distress came warbling across the bog.  It bubbled and wavered, spooky and sad. ‘That’ll be a curlew’ said John-Joe, Kai strained into the distance without seeing it.  He jumped on the spot to stop from shivering.



Then later
 Insects skated lazily across the scum surface of the ditch water. He poured water from his bottle to disturb the stagnant film.  It broke to drifting islands of filth. He examined his callouses, his split and bleeding finger joints and his blackened nails.  Sandwiches tasted better in the bog. 


Not Nature

Then the city, not its redbrick and cobblestone centre but its ring roads and tunnels, auto dealers and factories, storage depots and cranes, the giant containers strewn along the roadside to the docks.  The air was tangy with salt, not fresh like at the seaside but astringent, corroding the iron of the man made monsters bleeding them in rivulets of rust.